Thursday, March 13, 2014

50 word writing

Check out Shemira's 50 word writing about camp. It's awesome!

Flying Fox
Getting on, getting buckled in, that thrilling feeling not knowing if you are going to die or if you are going to never be filled with so much life. "Five, four, three, two Legs up" 'WHOOSH' the noise of the flying fox zips through my ears, I loved that feeling.

Mt Kahikatia
I feel like all the oxygen has been sucked out of me, my lungs have been crushed, my legs under a big boulder. Am I carrying bricks? 640 metres above sea level, slippery surfaces catch on to my feet, dirt moves on to my clothes. I was about to die.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Bryce wow that is some funny lies about your self. Bryce we cant believe that you did that.
    From Summer and Mackenzie Room 9

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