Monday, August 29, 2016

Paragraph Success Criteria

Today for writing T1 looked at what makes a good paragraph. In pairs we discussed what a good paragraph needs and we listed them on our Padlet. From these lists we are creating a DLO for others to follow when they are writing paragraphs. These will be uploaded onto our blogs in the next couple of days so don't forget to check them out!




4 comments:

  1. Great to see you collaborating to come up with the perfect paragraph. I can't wait to see your paragraphs! Go Totara 1

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  2. Hi Totara 1
    Looks like you guys will hae great paragraphs now that you know how to.
    Next time can you show how to make a great paragraph and an example.

    Kind Reguards
    Keelee

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  3. Ata Marie its cassidy I like how you all are coming up with great paragraph ideas I cant wait to see more ideas.
    From cassidy

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  4. Hi Totara 1.
    I really like your work, especially Jimmy and Griffins. They did a lot of work and had examples. I will use all these in my own writing to make it better.

    Bye, from Hannah

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Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.